KINA?
samjhanaka badal madarinchha jaba
aakhaka aashu ghatimai kina adkinchha?
sapanaka sansarma harayiinchha jaba;
thahai napayi mutu nai kina dhadkinchha?
pratikshyaka pal katidichha jaba,
milankai samaye kina bhadkinchha?
taaska mahel tutidinchha jaba;
chiriyera chhati nai kina tadpinchha???


ASTU!!!

0.3/10 no more then that

0.3/10 no more then that.

Kina kina timro tasvir malai niko lagcha?
Nabolera jati hidchau uti niko lagcha?
Kina?

Why NOT?

Ma sapanaako kura garchhu timi
Timi aakhaanko mol sodhchhou
Ma Dhuk-Dhukiko bayaan garchhu
Timi MuTuko taoul khojchhou

Timro parelaa bhijeko dekhdaa maile aaphnai aankha puchheko chhu
Timile paaeko harek choTamaa ma Du:kha karaaeko chhu
Ma endreNiko kura garchhu timi aakhako mol sodhchhou
Ma Dhuk-Dhuki bayaan garchhu Timi MuTuko taoul khojchhou

Timro bastima aoushile Tekdaa maile andheri raat bhogeko chhu
Timile boleko harek shabdamaa ma duber haraaeko chhu
Ma bhaawanaako kuraa garchhu timi mayako mol sodhchhou
Ma Dhuk-Dhuki bayaan garchhu Timi MuTuko taoul khojchhou

tnx nivan u r being too generous maile afai thaha payina tyo kavita ho ki katha?

MOL

yo sarirma bagne ragat nai raksi bhaye,
thopa thopa nichori piune thiye;
yo dhadkine mutu bina nai bachne bhaye,
kesra kesra kuchali jiune thiye;
moj majja sabai raichha hridaye nai nahunelai;
euta chhute arko auchha maya tutda narunelai
tutigaye, phutigaye, jiwansanga chhutigaye;
yi aakhaka sapana pani mutu jastai lutigaye!
na dhoka dinchha, na chot dinchha yo botalako paani,
pyas ta bujhayidinchha lutera ke bho jindagani;
na chhodijane , na modijane yo nashalu jhol
sada saath dineko chahi kina sasto mol???